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                                               पत्तों पे ओस
                                              रात  के आँचल से
                                              छिटके  तारे


                                                                                                                           Twinkling crystal  stars
                                            from dark robe of the night sky
                                            strewn dewdrops on grass 




35 comments:

  1. Hello Kokila, I’m really enjoying your words and all the lovely images. I’m going to pop over to visit Alice now, thank you for the link.
    Have a wonderful weekend, Barbara x

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    1. Hi there Barbara :) am glad you found time for a visit here... I can see you are busier these days with the other new blog and all :) wishing you luck for all of your endeavours :) AND am really happy that you are enjoying these Haikus :)
      yeah, you must hop to Alice's site.. Its wonderful :) Thanks again for the visit ... keep in touch ... as always :)

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    2. Hello Kokila, I wouldn’t miss out on your lovely blog, but I may be a little later than usual commenting. The new blog is taking up a lot of time, but I’m really enjoying finding out more about my family. Thank you for all your visits and comments. Barbara.

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  2. Loved this one too! The lil snow falling here were disappearing right on the tip. (I know it's silly to mention but I liked how my mouse scrolled to the right position :D ) Keep writing.
    Your Haikus inspires me to write one too! (yes, a long way to go but I am enjoying learning and stopping here. Best Wishes)

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    1. hey, have nominated you for the liebster award. Please check the following link for further details and accept it if it isn't against your blog policy. Cheers.
      http://embarkwithmythoughts.wordpress.com/2014/09/21/double-thank-you/

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    2. Thanks Shanx for everything ! No its not silly.... even I like the way the snow seem to dissolve in to dew-drops :) ... and the owner of the image, Alice, also liked that very thing :)
      Am touched you are finding these haikus good and Deepest thanks for the award ... no policy against receiving- awards as well as brickbats (if situation arise) :P

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  3. The picture above is gorgeous and words shine like dew drops!

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    1. Yes Uppal ji , the image certainly is nice ... Its done by Alice. I just wanted to match up to it :) Thanks fr your kind and inspiring words :)

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  4. This reveals a perfect picture in front of my eyes... :-)

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    1. Thanks Maniparna..... am glad you are able to see stars :P in dew-drops He He... all these nice comments I owe to you friend :) So thanks a TON.

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  5. What an imagination! Despite putting pressure on my mind, I ain't able to form another suitable words to describe this wonderful feeling of presenting stars to humans by Dark which is always considered as negative. Hats off to you, Kokila.

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    1. Its your innate depth of thoughts and beautiful flights of imagination which presents an entirely different view of a piece/idea.... Thanks Ravish for analysing the lines beautifully yet simply :)
      Yes .... Just like a Dark Blackboard can brightens the future of students... Dark night has bright stars of hope in sky and shower them as fresh dew drops on earth ..... It all depend on the students .... on US..... what we want to see, interpret and receive ... You are insightful.

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    2. Thanks Kokila for the honor. It's the reflection of your kind and generous heart. I'm indebted to you for presenting my views in a more understanding and better way. It shows your deep insights, communication ease and an empathetic nature.You're indeed a pure soul. God bless you dear!

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  6. Beautiful words and awesome picture! Tc! Keep smiling :) Happy writing :)

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me


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    1. Thanks Sindhu ....
      just returned from ' Tantu '...its absolutely beautiful and creative ... u are so beautiful and talented dear ! specially the safety pin jewellery ....
      Loved the space and count e a regular there now :)

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  7. Bohooth khoob,! Loved your poetry you are a very talented lady!

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    1. Aww Shashi.... so many thanks fro the compliment and the visit .. I was missing you and Millie and am waiting for her more friends .... :)

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    1. Thanks Sanjay.. great to see you here :)

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    1. Thanks Amit ! Apologies again n again for a late reply ... was in hibernation .. hope you'll understands :)

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    1. Thanks A ton Sougata !! Am glad you liked it :)

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  11. I love your Hindi and English Haiku... I think I will try it one of these days :)

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    1. I am glad you are liking these .... and yes, you must try these ...knowing your beautiful imagery and wordplay,I am sure you will be great at these :) Am waiting for those and All the very Best :)

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  12. I can picture it. And wow, a Hindi haiku. That's the first I have seen. :)

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    1. Thanks Anmol ....am glad you liked it .. I have a lot of catching up to do :)

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  13. Difficult to say what is more beautiful your words or the photo!

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    1. Thanks Mridula .. It must be the pic to inspire me for the words.... or was it the other way round :P :)

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  14. Love where your imagination took me through these very few words. That's really lovely, Kokila!

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    1. Thanks Beloo, I loved that you loved it :)

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  15. Very nice picture by Alice and the words you have written matches it so well :)

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    1. Thanks Vinay ... its pleasing you are liking these :)

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