Scent of Spring : Haiku


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                                       Like wisps of incense
                                       immerses and enthrals the soul
                                       scent of spring, vinous

(Inspired by Scattered Thoughts and Chevrefuille's Haiku-blog)

39 comments:

  1. Beautiful lines... :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Thanks Sindhu ! and welcome to the blog dear :)

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  2. Back to Haiku eh? :) The scent of spring indeed :)

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    1. He He ... Vinay, you CAUSES spring. Inspirational and honest words ALWAYS dissipates the darkness, gloom and uncertainty .... followed by spring of clarity and positivity :) Glad you are here.:)

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  3. Such beautiful words – I had to look up Haiku and vinous. I loved the sound of them but didn’t have a clear understanding of the meanings. I do now though. I am very impressed with your writing. Barbara x

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    1. Its gladdening to know that one is or one's writings are liked by friends... As i said in my earlier post, I knew Haiku but never liked them till now courtesy my other bloggy friends :) ... and for intoxicating , 'vinous' emerged out of the blue..Thanks again for your appreciation dear :)

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  4. Yay.. time to celebrate.. <3 ...wonderful lines Kokila...the scent of spring..really inviting and intoxicating....truly revealed through your words.... love it... :-)

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    1. Yay... due to you Mani... one day I'll try to write a Haiku fro your name with you pic as the motivating image :P
      Thanks for your appreciation Mnai, as I believe you are an honest one... :D

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  5. much in brevity... I have nominated you for an award. Do check http://ilakshee.blogspot.in/2014/09/my-award.html

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    1. Thanks Ilakshee ! Am glad you liked it and welcome to the space dear..... Oh! and I am thrilled by the award ... No matter if I have it . its always makes you feel loved :)

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    1. Coming from you.... its precious Chaitali ! Thanks dear :)

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  7. Insight of liveliness is beautifully illustrated through these enchanting lines using wonderful metaphors.

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    1. Indebted to you Ravish ... you are too kind :)

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  8. Longing for spring at the onset of autumn? Nice lines.

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    1. *smiles* Gratitude to you Sir, for the motivation :)

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    1. Am so happy you walked up to here dear girl ! And more so that you liked it ... am willing to use an indie word in it like you... :) Thanks and welcome Ruchi :)

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  10. I had to look up vinous.Made me understand the haiku better. Lovely string of words making up a perfect spring garden :)

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    1. Thanks dear .. am really glad you liked it ... though nothing can be more beautiful then the Angkor Vat Ruins I enjoyed courtesy - you :)

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  11. yes.. its quite intoxicating.. beautiful lines :)

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    1. Oho! and I thought nothing less than fresh cheese will lure you dear :P Thanks Meera :)

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  12. Beautiful lines Kokila and an amazing picture. I so miss spring now as its getting colder here...refreshing lines.

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    1. Am glad that you liked it.. I am just trying writing haiku and in dire need of honest criticism.. which I am expecting from you. So, I am taking the liberty of being pleased by your praise this time .. for next be more critical ..Okay! :P :) Love n wishes :)

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  13. Beautiful lines. Your Haikus are good :) Keep writing em. (I am learning them myself but I enjoyed them so yes, looking forward to more.) Best wishes
    -Shanx

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    1. Thanks Shanx for your wishes ... these words means a lot :) wishes to both of us on this Haiku journey :)

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  14. Love the smells reminiscent of Spring :)
    Lvely, Kokila :)

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    1. Thanks Anita :) and no worries for spellings dear :) half of the time I am writing right but pressing wrong keys :P

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  15. Sensuous! Splendid!
    Reminds me of Keats:)

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    1. OH God Amit ! Only similarity is the K in our names :P ... am glad you liked it because despite being mediocre its dear to me too :)

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    1. Well then Welcome to the Spring Lover's Club dear :) Thanks :)

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