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Friday, September 19, 2014

Tears :Haiku

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                                             round cascading pearls 
                                            liberate calm heal the soul
                                             fervent hot springs gush

42 comments:

  1. Profound and beautiful Kokila. I am loving your Haikus.

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    1. SOoo Glad that you are liking these Shanx :)

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    1. With utmost sincerity Uppal ji.. coming from you these words are precious ... Thanks for being so generous :)

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    1. Am really glad Mani you are liking these :)

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  4. I love the stream in the picture and the words too.

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    1. I am so glad to have honest to themselves and sorted out friend like you Mridula... I like the fact that no matter what, its the scenic beauty which gets you first and becomes visible in your words too ... :D
      am really glad the image and the words appealed you.. :)

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  5. Kokila, words along with the pic is a mesmeric experience. Little droplets falling in the pic like precious pearls is simply beyond the words....

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    1. AM really happy that it resonated well with you Ravish ... :) Thanks for the kind words :)

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  6. Lovely could relate to it well. The solace sometimes tears bring is unmatched.

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    1. Yes Shweta, the warmth and the healing, the torrent and the calm and fervent and liberating like the healing hot springs .... Thanks for the read friend :)

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  7. I agree. Tears sometimes, is a great pain reliever and a warm healer. Lovely!

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    1. Thanks Meoww.. It feels nice when our words resonate well with friends.... :)

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  8. Wow! I never thought that 'tears' can be presented like this! Happy blogging! TC! keep smiling :)

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    1. Thanks Sindhu ... these are truly uplifting words! thanks a lot ..with friends like you smile comes easy :)

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  9. Beautiful stuff there; loved the description of tears :)

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    1. Thanks Teny .... reviewed and okayed by you means fine :P

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  10. Beautiful pic and so well it has inspired you.

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    1. Thanks Indrani... m glad the pic appealed to you along with words :)

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  11. tears really soothe the soul, and comparing tears with warm spring...really wonderful!

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    1. Thanks Datta.... its gladdening to know you liked the simile .... :)

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  12. So original and touching.....wonderful line Kokila...:)

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    1. Thanks Priyashi.... Ah! the palace of mind :)

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  13. yes, tears relieves our pain and this is one such lovely imagery. big likes :)

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    1. Thanks Meera ..... hugs for the comment love :)

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  14. O that's beautiful. You have really captured the essence of the tears in these few words.

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    1. Thanks Beloo..... coming from a highly aesthetic and sensitive friend like you ... I allow myself smiles :)

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  15. Beautifully expressed Kokila !
    I love Haiku...and have tried my hand at it...Search for haiku in my blog and you will find it along with my digital art :)

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    1. Thanks Deepa...am hurrying off to yours :)

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  16. Tremendous!
    You might like this too: http://amitaag.blogspot.in/2012/12/blog-post.html

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    1. Thanks for being here Amit... and I have been there ..No words for your verse! Its beautiful and powerful.. Pure Magic.

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    2. Waise toh ye maine khud par hi likha tha, lekin gustaakhi maaf ho, aap ka haiku "tears" parh kar with due respects and regards, aap ko nazr kar diya:)

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    3. Yeah Amit.. I read your response and was marvelling what beautiful and honest way to describe yourself and your life in that response to your friend's query !!... and now as you have bestowed the honor on me, it means ... you know me and my life..inside out :) Thanks and am humbled :)

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  17. To liberate calm heal the soul.. Nice Haiku Kokila :)

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    1. Ah Vidyashree! we both must have experienced ALL types of tears to understand this ..eh! :D
      Thanks for the appreciation.. it means a lot .. WELCOME Dear !

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    1. Thanks Ranjana ! And a warm Welcome dear :)

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  19. Yet another awesome haiku from kokila :)

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