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                        मन मंदिर
                        मैं बाती स्नेह जली
                        जगमग तू

a loose translation- 
                        temple of my heart
                                                           I, the wick kindled by love
                                                           you are glowing bright  
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    1. Dhanyawad Cifar... aapke shabd mere liye bahut mahatvapoorn hain... Thanks friend :)

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  2. Very Beautiful, Deep Lines on True Unconditional Love where one is burning to make light in other's life. At the time Very Philosophic and Spiritual in terms of Maya and Divine Light illuminating through love. Lots of Kudos Dear :)

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    1. Unconditional Love.... Right as always Ravish :)
      in hindi 'sneh' has 2 meanings-oil and love .
      so just like the wick emits light only after being oiled, similarly, a person will emit light and illuminate life for a long time only after being loved (sneh) otherwise it (wick /person) will only burn to ashes and give out black smoke -irritating and dark....and shortlived.
      thanks Ravish for the spiritual touch :)

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  3. So much meaning in so few words. Simply beautiful.

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  4. सुंदर शब्द! Bahut hi sunder!

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    1. Dhanyawad Yogi :) Hope weather is fine in Ghaziabad :)

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  6. In the temple of heart, the eternal spark is ignited only after accepting the pain and love. Henceforth, the world is embellished by that eternal flame that continues to light in hearts (or so I think)
    Wonderful meaning and loved it. (Amazing Kokila how you weave a Haiku in Hindi too :D Something that's impossible for me ;) )
    Best Wishes!

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    1. Thanks for these beautiful words Shanx..And you are on absolutely right thought track... a track originating from selfless love and leading towards eternal love :) Your words keep me writing :)Thanks Again .

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  7. Beautiful lines Kokila..what a symbolization! the wick, kindled by love..great.. :-)

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  8. Hi Kokila. Good to see you back.Hope things are going great. A nice poem to start the way back :)..

    Hoping to see more :)

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    1. Thanks Vinay for your warm welcome and encouragement ... will try to be regularly active :)

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    1. Thanks Deepika .. welcome to the blog .. again :)

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    1. Thanks Sneh ... Keep travelling here too :P :)

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  11. WONDERFUL LINES...! JUSTICE DONE...!

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    1. Thanks VP ... Hope it touched your lost soul someway :) Thanks for the visit here :)

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    2. It wl..wen i wil find my lost soul :)

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  12. O that's amazingly beautiful in its simplicity and purity. Lovely, Kokila!

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