Dusk: Haiku


Source : Forest pond at dusk


                                                         amber and blue sky
                                                         burning clouds on russet-gold
                                                        autumn dusk .... twilight 



With Thanks  to Scarlet :) 

                                                      ruby claret gold
                                                      sunlit drying leaves fall slow
                                                      ochre autumn dusk

Shared with : CarpeDiemeHaikuKai
Inspired  by : pics by  Meoww's Musings 
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31 comments:

  1. This is beautiful. I love the lyrical roll to it. Just love it. You captured the essence of fall beautifully! ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy... I LOVE the play of colour in autumn leaves , so, was unable to resist this colour theme into dusk ! :P Thanks again for your sweet visit :)

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    1. Thanks Hamish ! You have a mysteriously beautiful place at www... getting lost and found in your wilderness... :) Thanks for the visit .

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  3. Beautiful Kokila :). It looks like a golden ornament on the top, bright, rich and so full of glitter :)

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    1. Thanks Vinay.... yeah Vinay, Autumn sure is beautiful and a riot of colours.... tried to capture it... so its rather unidimensional.. no depths and all but then beauty in itself is an elixir.. sometimes :)

      PS - you have used beautiful words.. turning poet ! eh ! Am waiting for that avatar :)

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  4. The images are marvelous, Kokila and the words complement the aura!

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    1. Thanks Uppal ji for the sweet words :)

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  5. Beauty of Nature...come alive with your wonderful words.... :-) ..love it <3

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    1. Thanks dear.. you know what your words mean to me .. :) hugs n cheers :)

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  6. Stunning images and sweet Haiku!

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  7. You just landed me in Yash Raj's Wonderland in midst of dried Gulmohar leaves all around with an aura of a romantic beautiful autumn evening :)

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  8. Yeah Ravish .. Thanks fro reminding me this.Now I too feel the same.. and exactly the same.... with leaves falling ... seems like love instead of gravity :) Glad you liked it :)

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  9. You are awesome at making word-arts Kokila :) I can see it even without the images :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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  10. Burning clouds....wow....that was something Kokila. Beautiful creation :)

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    1. thanks dear girl :) glad you liked it .. am learning Ahista..ahista ... :)

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  11. Excellent lines like the image. :)

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  12. Nice lines...makes everyone visualize even without the Pics...:)

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  13. Beautiful -- how you describe the delicious colours of Fall.

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    1. AM glad you liked it D :) Thanks for stopping by ...

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    1. Thanks a TON Bhavani ....
      PS. I am not able to reach you through G+ .... what's your URL ?

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  15. Fall has become my latest favorite season ever since I am able to appreciate its true beauty in person. Your haiku adds beauty to the beautiful.

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    1. Thanks Meoww for not only visiting and commenting but also as its your pics of fall which evoked these thoughts in my mind .... hence I mentioned you :)

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