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Friday, February 06, 2015

बाबा : हाइकु

                                                              बूढ़े पहाड़
                                                              दाढ़ी सी बर्फ आई
                                                               आप  की याद

SOURCE : Pinetrest 
                                                              
                                                                 गए जो आप   
                                                                 तो गया  प्यार , लाड़ 
                                                                 भी खोया कहीं 

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                                                                  किस्से कहानी
                                                                  कविता, लोरी, बातें
                                                                  हुईं  लो यादें 


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                                                             गोद में सोना 
                                                             छत पे टहलना
                                                              हुआ ज्यों  ख़्वाब 

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                                                             नहीं भूला तो 
                                                             सिर पे मेरे स्पर्श                                                
                                                             वो स्नेहमय 


48 comments:

  1. sweet verses soaked with nostalgia!

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    1. Thanks Uppal ji :) your words are always precious :)

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  2. Each one of them are so cute Kokila and so many emotions in each one of them.. Lovely :)

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    1. Thanks Vinay:) Hope its easy wali Hindi :)

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  3. Soaked in emotions, each of them.

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    1. Thanks a lot !! Welcome to the space Alok ... :)

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  4. Awww, miss my Grandpa. That generation was so classy ..... and a class apart!
    Btw, what happened to your English posts? Are they merged with current blog or separate?

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    1. Thanks for the comment love and the consideration sweety.. it so sweet :)
      Yeah that generation was something else...
      Am being busy due to kid's exams and all ... planning to be regular from mid of Feb :)

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  5. Amazingly written. Loved the Haiku in hindi! It's the first time i have read a haiku in hindi.

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    1. Thanks Ajay :) I am glad you loved it ...and friend, welcome to the Hindi Haikus :)

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  6. Lovely!
    I'm glad this is not in sophisticated hindi. :)

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    1. Thanks Dee .... :) To see your name in my blog is enough to make me smile and I am sporting an ear to ear grin right now, while replying :) So glad to know you better ... thanks for the comment :)

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  7. Wonderful lane of memories penned down there with nostalgia, touch, and what not...

    behtreen haiku Kokila :)

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    1. Hey boy!
      nice to hear from you...
      Thanks for the comment as I feel you will write only if you mean it :)

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    2. Yup...wouldn't have written If I didn't feel.. it's straight from heart and reaches every heart Kokila :) Beautiful!
      toffee ke khazana
      kiya laad aur dher saara pyaar
      suna kahaaniyaan bharmaar

      (bites off the nails hoping it makes sense Kokila)

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    3. spare your nails Boy !
      U always make sense ... though this one is not 5-7-5 .. and you already know it , Its beautiful :)
      Love to have that toffe ka khazana --- at that time Pan-pasand,Swad and orange wali toffee were the rage.... baki sab Melody
      khao ,khud jaan jaao :)
      cheers for the lines ...
      and welcome the the Hindi poetry buddy ! :)

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  8. Words can ooze love and nostalgia.... once again proved! Beautiful set of haiku..melted my heart... :-)

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    1. Thanks Mani.. you know how I treasure your words friend..
      I used to miss the/that father figure terribly,hence its really felt ..

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  9. Touching words of lovely memories. ..
    So true. Lucky are those who have their fathers.
    Well expressed as usual, Kokila :)

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    1. Well said Anita ! Lucky are those .. and infact we all who have parents and grandparents are lucky to have them :)
      Thanks for the sweet words dear .. Its always a pleasure to see your smiling face here :)

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  10. Such beautiful images kokila, they made me think of my own dear dad and granddad. I’ve got so many of your posts to catch up on which is a good thing as I can sit down each evening and enjoy them. Thanks for your friendship and your lovely blog. Barbara x

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    1. Its lovely to see you here again Barbara :)
      I am glad you got the gist of it through images .. yes its a nostalgic Haiku set remembering the father figure - father or grandpa :)
      Thanks for the lovely words dear :)

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  11. I was very close to my grand pa...lost him a year back. He was 97, lived his life full. My eyes were moist reading it...nostalgic in his memories. Loved the creation babe. Its so beautiful and heart wrenching.

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    1. I am glad if my words were able to bring back to you some pleasant and love-filled memories ..
      My grandmother also lived her life full,with happiness and zest ... and we too, lost her two years back, so can relate to your feelings dear girl ...Grandparents evoke an image of a pleasant, neverending warmth :)
      Thanks for sharing your feelings dear friend.

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  12. so well said in small packets of words. :)

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  13. Brought back lovely memories....beautiful.

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  14. Even though I am not so good at Hindi, I still understood the Message conveyed.... Well said!

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    1. Great to know that Sir and I apologise for not giving the translation.. I am updating it right now :)

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  15. The bond between grandparents and grand children is really special. Lovely words.

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    1. Well said Mridula !
      Glad you liked it :)

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  16. Touching. Barfili beard - that's such a lovely image :)

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    1. Thanks Beloo..You have picked out the central image which made me write it ...
      This Haiku poem started from there and is is woven around the "Boodhe pahad, Barf si Daadhi..."
      .... and as the dads of our generation sported a long, white beard almost never... I converted the image to that of grandpas...as the affection and the essence of their love is similar AND I was not ready to lose the Barfili Beard :P :)

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  17. I read it again..it sounds more beautiful... :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot mani... you are welcome again n again girl :) hugs n wishes :)

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  18. सुन्दर हाइकू , हालाँकि मैंने कभी ये दादा-दादी ,नाना -नानी का प्यार नहीं देखा पर में इसकी कमी महसूस कर सकता हूँ

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    1. Sahi kaha Cifar... kuch kamiyan puri bhi nahi kari jaa sakti .. I too had this love for a a very short period but mercifully,I had it ...
      Aapke comment ke liye shukriya Cifar :)

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  19. As always, your words touch a chord in my heart. Keep haiku ing Kokila!

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    1. Thanks a lot Meoww.. Your words have given me so much pleasure ...to know that it touched your heart is the best reward ...
      And thanks for the term - haiku ing :)

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    1. Thanks Amit ...and Glad to see you active after a long time :)
      WElcome again :)

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  21. That last picture in B&W is so touching.

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    1. Thanks Haddock .. glad you visited :)

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  22. Just read the title and expected something beautiful. Wasn't disappointed. I can say something about you... You are nothing, if not consistent. :)

    Lovely!

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and glad you are not disappointed :)

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