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                                                           truth just  makes us strong, so play
                                                            sports... no games with me 


Thanks Deborah

                                                               I dive... try to grab
                                                               hold, capture stars from the stream
                                                               night plays with my heart



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                                                         Focus what you want

                                                         play wisely  the game of life 
                                                         'coz you might win it

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    1. Thanks a Lot Payal :) I am glad that the words resonated well with you ...
      And Welcome to my blog :)

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  2. Those are some profound verses! The first one is my favorite :)

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    1. Thankeww Keirthana .... Am glad to meet you in person and to see you here is amazing !! Welcome dear :)

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  3. Hmm! So you girls are a team of Haiku! Cool! Loved it.

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    1. He he Ajay :) Gang Of Girls :):D
      Thanks for the 'cool' words :)

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  4. These words are really really inspiring a lot! I just love these haikus, Kokila :)
    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Thanks Sindhu .. you know that your words are always important to me :)

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  5. Amazing haikus, Kokila. Loved every word

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    1. Thanks TON Kiran.. it means a LOT to me dear :)

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  6. Stars in the stream?
    Beautiful!

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    1. Thanks a lot Dee....
      on a lighter note, with my two too-much kids I usually see stars everywhere :P
      loved your fire in the sky pic :)

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  7. Play wisely the game of life – such powerful words, I’m going to make them my mantra for 2015.

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    1. First of All Welcome Back Dear :)
      Am so glad it resonated well with you..
      Missed your kind and lovely words ...

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  8. Hey, whenever you don't find my comments on your posts especially haiku or poems, don't think that I haven't read it; just assume that I don't have better praiseworthy words to match your hard work & creative imagination :)

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    1. He he he .. Ravish thats enough to leave me speechless ! :p:)
      Thanks for the praise Bhai :)

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  9. Inspiring words, Kokila. Beautiful wordplay and life's lessons for us all.

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    1. Thanks a lot Rachna .. Its really gladdening to hear from you always :)

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  10. So nicely worded.... Hats off to the Poetical Expressions!

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    1. Thank you SreedharJi :) Your words mean a lot to me :)

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  11. Am amazed super haiku trio. I sooooo loved the first one, could relate better babe! The second wow I just wanted to sit there by the river bed and read this haiku again. The third you may win yeh so true would get to know at the end of journey :) love you hugs

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    1. Thanks dear livewire girl for the sweet comment-love :) SO happy that you liked all three :) Yes, the first one is what I/you/ we want others to practice...

      the second one has a philosophical tangent too - "I dive (into this ocean of worldly charms) try to grab stars (shining wisdom, love ) but/while night (of ignorance,selfishness,'I' factor, lust....) plays with me (tempts my soul )... weather we are able to break-through that dark night and behold the precious stars of true love and wisdom is ... yet to be seen "

      third one is positive but it more of a caution.. dont be Overconfident

      ... take notice of the word"might" in last line..... means - we ask/plan for our life but we have a doubt that our plan may not work or we may not be granted what we asked from HIM..... SO "Be cautious ! ask wisely,looking at the bigger picture... ask for health rather than double cheese crusted pizza... as what we have asked/planned may actually come true ..AND I don't want you to say "If only I would have asked for something else !"

      Hope you still like these :) Love n cheers :)

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  12. 3 different haikus for same subject.. wow, u r becoming haiku queen..

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    1. Thanks Roohi ... your words are like your name dear Sukun-e-rooh :)
      Glad to know you better and see you here :)

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  13. So much positivity in the last one. Thanks, Kokila!

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    1. Thanks Alok ...Really happy you liked it ... :)

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  14. Excellent lines! Focus most necessary in life! It is what allowed U to write sch b'ful lines! :)

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    1. Thank you so much Amrita ... you are so kind and affectionate with your words...Motivating in truest sense :)

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  15. Truly inspiring.....so play sports.... No games with me. Simply loved it!!!

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    1. Thanks Bhavani... great to hear from you :)

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  16. I loved the so play sports... No games with me. line. Punch! Well done Kokila!

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    1. Yeah Meoww ! Absolutely .. honest sports with us ..no games ! Thanks friend :)

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  17. no games with me . Nice and meaningful

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  18. Great ones.
    The first one is smashing!

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  19. Ah! Such positive thoughts.
    i remembered the song- "Quit playing games with my heart" :)
    Sports & winning laurels for the country is better than playing games and breaking someone's heart!
    Nice ones, Kokila! :)

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    1. Well said Anita and you know that I love it when you relate the idea with a beautiful song or movie so simply !!
      And the song is one of my favourites :)
      yeah, its better to concentrate on the goal rather than playing games ... :)
      Thanks for the sweet motivating words friend :)
      Love n cheers.

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  20. Lovely ones, Kokila :) love your thoughts!

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    1. Ah ! now its working!! Great :)
      Well thanks Archana for the comment love :) hope you are enjoying your visits here :)

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  21. I dont know what is the problem , but for these last 3 comment love from my dear friends this thing/site simply does not responds to the reply tab !! So replying you here dear friends in separate boxes ..
    Thanks for the appreciation Mridula :) I am glad you loved these :)

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