Haiku : Weep



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                                                                               snow melts down as rills
                                                                               pale winter sun , land scarred red
                                                                               mourning hills weep..ache 




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16 comments:

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    1. Hey Rat !!
      Thanks dear ..nibbling here after a long time dear .. glad you visited :)
      love n hugs :)

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  2. The haiku is classic babe...the words handpicked and adjectives are like wow....loved it :)

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    1. coming from my bestie , its lovely but girl your comment words are far more precious ... :)
      Stay happy dear :)

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  3. I second Shweta. She has already said my words :-D :-P

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    1. He he Maniparna ... there is this telepathy working here in a triangle..right girl :)
      Thanks to you dear .. and to her that I keep on writing ...ab jo bhi hai you both have to bear :)

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  4. Such agony...
    When I admire words as yours in this Haiku, words that portray sadness, there is both a happiness and a wistfulness in the admiration.
    The picture you have chosen to go with your words really adds to the impact.

    Love it... as always :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Nimi..you know that your words mean so much to me ..'wistfulness' is such a nice and correct word for one of the many emotions in it !
      You have felt it full dear and so glad for that :)

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    1. Not only people but trees, hills, snow ..all seem desolate in Kashmir ....

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    1. The misery of man and nature both ...

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  7. Profound, sad, and so rightly said. The right words chosen and superb Kokila :)

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    1. Thanks again n again boy !
      praise coming from the master of emotions .. means something :)

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  8. It's touching... .... .....
    I have a doubt! Do you pick the picture for haiku or do you do the reverse?!! I mean, you add so apt picture everytime!

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    1. Its first the idea , then the image ...so glad you are liking these..
      Thanks A TON Sindhu .. really mean it :)

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