Being Me (FPFS : Day Five)


Pihu : Muzhappilangad Beach in God's own country.. 




body stained by sands
 oblivious to the waves 
 am just being Me.



I have been tagged by my soul-sis Maniparna to take part in Five photos Five stories Challenge (FPFS) which is- Post a picture for 5 consecutive days and attach a post to it , fiction, poem or short write-up.It can be anything to suit your taste.
I am tagging  another of my very dear  friend  Nimi  on this last day . Glad to be able to complete it successfully :)


16 comments:

  1. I want to do that and I so loved the line oblivious of stains :) loved it to bits babe!!

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    1. Thanks a lot dearie :) Glad you liked it girl and that you get the layered meaning .. :)
      This is what we can do - be oblivious to stains, sands, waves..... and just start being us/me - happy, content and blissful
      hugs :)

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  2. I so liked the picture...childhood is such innocence and fun..wonderful Kokila... :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Mani :) Its all because of your tagging that I came up with this image of innocence and childhood :)
      Always a pleasure to see you here girl :)

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    1. So many thanks Kiran :) Just came back from your 'born ' wali flower write up-loved that to bits :)

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    1. Thank you ... so happy you liked it :)

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  5. Be your self; be you always; Great haiku.

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  6. I want to go back to my childhood and do that all over again. Hugs Barbara

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    1. Yeah. we all want to :)
      Thanks a lot Barbara.. your words always make me smile :)

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  7. Beautiful :) How sad this haiku is true of most children, but not so true of so many adults (who can "just be themselves").

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    1. Very True Amy :(
      If only we too can be unfazed of the problems and stigmas and lead a life just being the way we are ....
      Love :)

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  8. Beautiful Kokila :) So true! Without a care being self and being lost in creativity, or anything for that matter. That's so me too :D :D (a kid after all :P ) Thanks for sharing! (The pic is mast and so is the Haiku.. ab sach batao..Pihu ko daat padi? ;) ) "daag acche hain" yaad aagaya!

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    1. Nahi Shanx not at all ....koi daant nahi padi ..ulta she scolded me for leaving the beach before night !!
      And I am so happy yo know that you are Aldo similar ...carefree while writing/reading... Thanks for this dil se wala comment shinchan :);):)

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