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Thursday, July 09, 2015

Calm : Haiku

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                                                Trees on autumn fire
                                               burnt, bare ... to embrace His Love
                                                new buds spring... calm spreads







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                     bright sparks of passion 
                     coy glow of love- both observe 
                     faith is silent ... calm 








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53 comments:

  1. D, you have become a Haiku Machine – dar dar dar dar..... No single bullet! :P

    A complete spiritual journey through the route of love. Beautifully depicted lovelorn state through autumn fire and then unison. After burning all the excitements, calmness spreads.

    In second haiku, passion leads to love, and then both go beyond through conscious observation – finally established in state of faith as Buddha.

    Superb Awesome Amen :)

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    1. Thank you Ravish as always for the interpretation.. which is always perfect and sometimes beyond that :)

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  2. Mesmerizing read Kokila. Your words are indeed penetrating! Hats off :)

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  3. Kokila, If there is one word to describe the haikus, it is Ethereal.

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    1. Thank you Somali for the read and the wonderful comment dear :)

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  4. You seem to have perfected the haiku form of poetry. Profound words!

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    1. Thank you Uppal ji for your generous words :)

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    1. Glad you found it so Lata ..Thank you :)

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  6. Drenched in and intoxicated by the bliss of calm in your twins, Kokila!

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    1. Thank you Amit.. glad you enjoyed :)

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  7. Very well done- evocative, strong images.

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  8. Beautifully penned, Kokila.

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    1. Whatever Rachna Says .. Ma'm :) Thanks for stopping by dear :)

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  9. Much said in a few words, Kokila.
    Super analysis by Ravish & agree with all the previous commentators :)

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    1. Thank You Anita ... Glad to see you here old friend :)

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  10. Faith is silent.. Indeed, indeed :).. Such a powerful notion, a force which makes a lot of difference..

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    1. Thank you Vinay,coming from you the words mean a lot :)

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  11. You are best in Haiku as usual. So graceful and wonderful... :)

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  12. Thanks a lot Abhijit ..a pleasure you stopped by :)

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  13. Thanks a lot Abhijit ..a pleasure you stopped by :)

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  15. A delightful read and the pictures are magnificently beautiful. The description couldn't have been any better :)

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    1. Thank-you Deeshani ..pleased to know you liked it dear :)

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  16. Beautiful and thought-provoking haikus that left me completely speechless. You're amazing, Kokila :)

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    1. Thank-you Purba ..its words like these which make one write better..or Try to write better ..:) hugs.

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    2. Thank-you Purba ..its words like these which make one write better..or Try to write better ..:) hugs.

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  17. sublime and spiritual Kokila
    5stars .

    rajkumarmilan. wordpress. com

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and welcome to the space here :)

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  18. Autumn fire (y)!!!
    And divinity -- the outcome has to be wondrous. Love how your poetic mind works, Kokila!!

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    1. Thank-you Girl...your words and presence never fail to uplift my spirits dear :):)

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  19. i don't know whether first photograph is real or not, but we can see similar beautiful scenes in Kashmir when chinaar's shed their leaves in autumn.

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    1. I wish Arora Ji,that one day I'll be there to experience the wonderful sight and capture it in MY camera... Till then Google images are my source of inspiration ... :) thanks for stopping by :)

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  20. Very well written. I like this "autumn fire". :)

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    1. Thank-you Parul :)glad you liked it :)

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  21. "coy glow of love'- true love is soothing and the realization emanates a divine glow... beautiful, Kokila..

    and, again, faith is silent and brings calmness , both spiritually and physically.... :-)

    For the first one, I think, rebirth and rejuvenation spread a feeling of all-encompassing calmness... :-)

    A wonderful pair of haiku... (the plural of haiku is also haiku)

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    1. Rightly interpreted soul-sis with your trademark eloquence ....pleased you like it MANI :)

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  22. Beautifully penned, twin Haiku, Kokila. Your words always give me a feeling of hope, and peace.

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    1. Thank-you Kiran for your wonderful words which are always motivating and a good example of calm :):D

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  23. I love how it snows here during autumn :D Your haikus are divine Kokila :)
    "faith is silent ... calm" those 4 words speak pages. Very beautiful indeed.

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    1. He HE Ranju .. snow in autumn !! so right :)
      Thanks dear for all the comment-love and appreciation :) :)

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    1. Thank you Jyotsna :) Glad you liked it :)

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  25. Wow.. Brilliantly crafted haiku..

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  26. Wow Kokila, glad I looked into your old posts. These are gems!

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    1. Thanks a million Indrani :) its so sweet of you dear :):)

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