फासले : हाइकू

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                                                                                फासलों  से क्या ?
                                                                                कि पा लेंगे किस्सों में  - 
                                                                                फिर तुमको  




                                                                        will meet you in verse 
                                                                       my eyes caressing your words
                                                                       eternal embrace




फासलों - distances ,                                                                      किस्सों - stories


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62 comments:

  1. Short Poetical lines with deep emotions embedded in.. Well expressed!

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  2. Yes, distance is only a fiction in the mind :) Beautifully penned, Kokila.

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    1. SO Glad it appealed to you Beloo :) Thank you dear :)

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  3. Wow! This is so beautiful, Kokila. I love the way you think :)

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    1. It's heartening to know you liked it Purba !! Thank you :)

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  4. This is such a beautiful thought ! Wow!

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    1. Really pleased Somali that you liked it dear ..even if you have not liked it , your presence here would have made me glad ! Thank you :)

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  5. The embrace says it all. I like the image of words hugging the person, a very beautiful picturisation :)

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    1. Thank you Vinay ..happy you liked it:) the image is eloquent indeed :)

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  6. So beautiful Kokila, yes! true love is free. Resides in the heart. :)

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  7. The picture is awesome so as the haiku. Great work.

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    1. Thank you so much Ashish !! Smiles :))

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  8. "my eyes caressing your words"!! That's superb! Trust me bestie, I just fell in love with the line... this is your best!!

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    1. You Just made my day! and the best thing about having a soul-sis is that you know it :)
      Hugs :)

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  9. Wow.. this has great depth, love your thought-provoking take on it. :')

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    1. Thank you Maitreni.. such a pleasure,you liked it :)

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  10. वह किस्से जो मैं लिख दूँगी तुम्हारे नाम .....बहुत सुन्दर कोकिला :)

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    1. ढेर सारा धन्यवाद ..सुनयना:)
      hope I got your name right in Hindi dear :)

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    2. I write it either ways....सुनैना/सुनयना :)

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    3. Sure ! hope to entice you more here :)

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  11. Ongoing affair!! Beautifully expressed!!

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  12. It reminds me of letter which resides in my diary. Now, I'm going to read it after a long time. And I agree with Maniparna. :)

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  13. So so beautiful! Jo door hote hain kisson mein hi milte hain!

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  14. Was short & wonderful,
    beautiful :)

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  15. WOW!! Superb expression of emotion in words!!!

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  16. You touched my soul with your verses. Beautiful!

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  17. So beautiful! As usual! A hope, which make the distance bearable. Awesome, Kokila!

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    1. Hey! Glad you found your words!:p ThankYou :)

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    1. Thank you so much Swati..glad you liked it :)

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    2. किस्सों में जो पा लिया, बाकी कुछ न रहा - very beautifully expressed kokila. :)

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    3. Glad it resonated well with you ..Honored Sangeeta ji:)

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    1. Thank you Nisha..glad to see you here girl :)

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  20. Wow! I am speechless..
    You just gained a follower!

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