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Friday, December 25, 2015

Blue : Haiku


                                                               

               
                                                                              a dull and gray blue 
                                                                              bare like a wind-played sky
                                                                              the battered  bruised heart




                                                                               achromatic blue
                                                                               the colour of loss, heart feels
                                                                               a lachrymose sky 



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6 comments:

  1. Philosophical depth to the lines,Kokila!Well done!

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    1. Always a pleasure to hear from you Uppal ji. I tried to portray that with achromatic, don't know how much I succeed.
      Thank-you :)

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  2. The colour blue is often associated with pain and melancholy. You've made the haiku really feeling in that way, a sharp yet subtle sense of grief hovering over them. Wonderful as usual, soul-sis... :-)

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    1. You know that how happy your comments make me feel soul-sis! Glad it appealed to you ..Thank you :)

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  3. Blue is my fav color. I always associate it with Sattva. As it lacks Rajas tattva, it may appear as dull or colour of loss. A symbol for loss of ego. :)

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    1. Great connection Bhai .. I relate white with sattva and red and black with Rajas and Tamas respectively. Words are as deep as their readers are .... And I am pleased you related it that way .. positive interpretation :)

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