Friday

Senryu : Dreamcatcher







                      pearls of longing gleam
                     wishes twirl like feathers soft
                      wakefulness and dreams

                      vibrant threads of love
                      needled in my heart, I knit
                      our own dreamcatcher





Image : sunshinebluecloud blog



15 comments:

  1. The last para is such a dream for many. Loved it :D

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    1. To weave a common dream and catch that too is indeed a dream! I am blessed to have one such Dreamcatcher...Thank-you!

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  2. सुंदर शब्दों से पिरोया है इस द्रीमकेचर को ... इसके संसार को ....

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    1. Bahut shukriya, Sir for your constant support! :)

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  3. Wow! You really weave magic with words..they themselves make/become dreamcatchers! <3

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    1. Coming from a sensitive artist it means a lot. I am glad you liked it Deepa! :)

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  4. Played with the words very nicely.Loved it.

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  5. Really liked it bestie :) longing is a pain but the dream keeps up alive and going.

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  6. Right...Dreaming against reason, hoping against hopes.. aware all the time that once broken, Rahim ka dhaga judta nahi. :)

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