Love -a senryu

                                                     Love bloomed pink
                                                      world faded away
                                                      I found you






Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry capturing moods of nature and seasons in all their vivid hues by presenting a juxtaposition of elements.
It is like a white frothy waterfall gushing in full glory glimpsed through a crevice. It seizes the scene in its brevity of 5-7-5 or 3-5-3 syllables and then, simply guides the reader towards the view from that crack.

What the reader takes in from there depends upon perception and receptiveness.


When nature reflects human emotions like in the above composition,the haiku evolves into a Senryu.

15 comments:

  1. This Haiku ❤️❤️ and your clicks are always way too beautiful

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    1. Thank you, Mansi! It feels great to be appreciated by someone who herself has such wonderful sense of beauty! Hugs! 😊

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  2. Beautiful click and so also the haiku.

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    1. Thank you, Jyotirmoy! Great that you liked both! 🙋

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    1. Thank-you, Ma'am! Always good to have you here! 😊🙋

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  4. Aha... after a long time! The magic of your pen (keyboard). Beautiful click and so is the senryu... :-)

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    1. Hey,Maniparna!You make blogging richer!Hope you are enjoying winters in North!

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  5. That's ever so lovely!! Such a gorgeous bloom too! <3

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    1. The artist in you is sure to admire mother nature's prettiest adormnents! Thank-you, Deepa!

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  6. A very clear picture of love. It beautifully hints the state of lover, beloved, and the world before & after the blossoming of love within. Kudos :)

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    1. The world indeed 'changes colour' when a person realizes he is in love! Thank-you, Bhai!

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  7. Ditto the many comments above. :)

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  8. Ditto the many comments above. :)

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